Monday, August 29, 2011

Gods Among Men

    Again, this is a poem I did in the 'Verse, Chorus, Verse, etc.' structure. What I really enjoy about this one is that, not only is the structure similar to another art form (music), but the verses themselves each refer to different types of art. I thought it would be an interesting way to tie them all together using one form.


Pluck a string
Strike a chord
Make us dance
Make us sing
Bend us all to your will
Listening closely to your song of lies

We are all gods in our own right
Making changes to our worlds
Maybe no one else will see
No one else may notice
But in the end we are each all powerful
And we make ourselves who we know we are
Inside

Exit right
Exit left
Take center stage
Take the spotlight
Play the hero this one time
You're still the villain to our lives

We are all gods in our own right
Making changes to our worlds
Maybe no one else will see
No one else may notice
But in the end we are each all powerful
And we make ourselves who we know we are
Inside

Turn a phrase
Write a line
Tell a story
Just paraphrase
Paint a landscape just with words
Reveal a history of your own

We are all gods in our own right
Making changes to our worlds
Maybe no one else will see
No one else may notice
But in the end we are each all powerful
And we make ourselves who we know we are
Inside

Draw a line
Paint a scene
Make a landscape
Make a world
Show everyone what you see
Share your world with all around

We are all gods in our own right
Making changes to our worlds
Maybe no one else will see
No one else may notice
But in the end we are each all powerful
And we make ourselves who we know we are
Inside

Thursday, August 25, 2011

Jail Cell Escape Artist - Adrienne Allmen

Back to my jail cell where my heart’s locked away
Peril faces me square with juxtaposed judgment eyes
Cunning conqueror to underworld manipulations, lies
Feeding poison to my already ill-heart, attempts to induce my demise

Bars so thick and tightly linked, no meager hand of mine could bend
Shut in, taken hostage of, in-part self inflicted, “I got myself into this”
My vision is cleared but was it little to late?
My heart and intuition tell me this is not my fate

I can leave, get free, live without these ties
The feelings of dissatisfaction, DISGUST
DISGRACE provoking a lack of faith
Lending myself to despair needing an escape!

Watching witnesses to heart-aches, disappointments of love and life
Struggle, pain, hypothermia, prostitution, drugs, alcoholism, parental misery
Love: with the slogan “hazardous materials handled here”
Volatile hearts, aches, breaks, awakenings, piercing truths and false-hoods
Combined in a mucus-based pleasantry, appetizer to love

Lingering welcomings, cumings, and re-runnings
Playing in heads while waiting to fall asleep in bed
Day-dreaming of a reincarnation, re-birth, a happiness sea
Pleasant sunshine beaming through holes in the tree’s canopy

Drug dealers, pushers, user, wannabes, sex with exhibitionism
Alcohol, wonder-wall, sea wall, wondering stars
Dimmed smiles, hugs, tongues, hands lending their way to the wise
The one searching for a home, lingering in back alleys on never ending travels

Whispers of faith, spirituality humanity helping one another
Creating hope, love circles, support, tears of happiness
Opening the mind to the possibility of compassion
Reactions to the beauty in the dire, desperate destinations we find ragged bodies in

Lifted spirits, reminded souls of goodness, re-born, re-awoke
Methods of mending, lending, sharing, communities provoked
To take-part, be, settle in peace, breathe, relax, happen, smile
Centre-folds of held hands, mission ties to far off lands
And in-country bans to violence, silence, and volatile ignorance

Paving ways; the poor to rich, rich to poor understand the need to insure
Balances, respect, societal needs met, safety nets and knowledge
Providing power to the ones who do not explore, who keep walls up
Who starve curiosity, stick with a philosophy that hinders the spirit to fly
Move above and beyond our domestic lives

Hope set free
Belief, over take me!
A faith un-ruined, a love burned in
Gates to enter as one life helps another begin
By Adrienne Allmen : New Classic Beauty : http://www.newclassicbeauty.com/

Monday, August 15, 2011

Art

    I was going to use this post as a kind of launchpad for one of the ways I want to expand this blog: visual art. As much as I started this in the interest of poetry and to get my poetry out there and read by people other than myself, I also always wanted to expand this blog to more about the arts in general: poetry, short-stories, creative writing, drawings, paintings, music, etc. It was my intention to post some of my own drawings but as I was going through my sketch book I realized, "I suck at drawing!". So having decided to scrap the idea of putting my own drawings on here I decided to use this post as more of an advertisement to ask that anyone would like to have their drawings or paintings posted on here (with full credit going to you...of course) email me at: guitarist06@msn.com. The same goes with anyone who wants to have their poetry, creative writing, or whatever posted on here.

    On somewhat of a side note, I was also thinking about having reviews done on here. For books, CD's, concerts, movies. You name it. I think it would be a great way to bring things full-circle in a way, by not just presenting it but by also appreciating and critiquing. For any and all inquiries, be them about any of the above or anything else, just use the email address above.

    Also, the next update about our move will be done up shortly and on here in the next couple of days.

Friday, August 12, 2011

Moving Update

    So here I sit in MY (read: our) living room with a nice cold glass of beer watching TV and about to complete two complete weeks of living in my first place (again, read: our).Not only have the last two weeks been quite hectic filled with good times, bad times, and in between times but so was the time leading up to this move. I had posted awhile ago saying that I was wanting to do some updates centering around this experience, so here we go.

    For those who may not be aware, I'm 23 and engaged to my girlfriend of three-and-a-half years and up until July 30, 2011 we lived at our respective parents homes. On that day we moved into the townhouse we bought, the first time either of us had moved out of our parents homes. This is a very new, uncharted, exciting territory for us both but by staying beside each other we have been able to stay happy and strong through the difficult moments. Was that a little too sappy and cliche? I thought so. I apologize and hope you can forgive me, but onwards now.

    I think I'll start with some of the trials and tribulations that occurred before we moved in. About 4 days before we took possession we went into our notary public to sign the final papers for all the transfers of title and the like. Near the end we were informed that the strata we were moving into had no building insurance and that there had been no insurance on the building for roughly 7 months. To make matters worse the paperwork that the strata provided our notary stated that the strata was broke. We were given a choice, if the strata didn't get building insurance within 24 hours we could walk away from the deal, no harm, no foul. However, if they got building insurance within that time period we were hooked and there was no out.

    As the deadline for them getting insurance drew closer we became increasingly confused as to what we should do if they weren't able to get any. Fortunately, or unfortunately, depending on how you want to look at this entire situation, they got the insurance but they were only able to afford 2 months worth. Which made the decision making process a lot easier to make but also made us a little uneasy. What's going to happen after 2 months when the insurance is up, will they be able to afford more? Will they even care since they had already gone 7 months without? What if they don't get any and then the place burns down, me and my fiance will be stuck paying a mortgage on a pile of ashes for the next 30 years.

    Day by day we started to ease down a little bit and decide to focus on the move and to get settled in and that in the grand scheme of things we did have 2 whole months to try and get this all turned around and running well, not just for us, but for the entire strata.

    This wound up being a little bit longer than anticipated and I have a little bit to do around the house. I'll have to pick this up from moving day next time. Also I've been working on a couple of poems, I should hopefully be able to start getting back into the swing of things for the poetry updates sooner than I originally anticipated.

Thursday, August 11, 2011

Bombardment - Adrienne Allmen

Incestuous flies
Leading to our demise
Diseased creatures
Brains rotting…
-
Hoards pleading to their preacher
To be their teacher – the one to guide
But no one hears, so fall prey to your fears
As Doomsday draws nearer

When all creatures – beasts and man
Fall before old Earth’s command
For we are mere pawns placed in her hands
Set free for a while and in turn we defile
The very gift of life itself;
Respect for nature’s bountiful wealth.

Instead turn it gray, make mess where it hurts
Burn up the sands, dig up the dirt
Put rivers where we want
For them only to flood and kill
Destroy the life giving water
The only allowance for this moment of thrill

Lest we forget?
Where do we begin?
The progression of movement
Must grant us a win.

Mass production, mass produced
Carbon filled and cancer induced
Diseases prevail, humanity and humility deprave

Tampering our climate, tempting Mother Nature to kill
Mass murderous monsoons and man’s oil spills
Bloodying the water for miles around
Great Gulf and sea shore gone, only crude oil to be found.

Millions killed, now millions starve
While rich men laugh sitting high on the barge

Television telling and teaching us young
“Forget about that toy, now this one’s more fun!”
“Buy this and you must get that
All the while five year old children are obesely FAT!

Who is this Rat feeding us this poison?
It’s sinking into us to perpetuate this notion
But forget that noise! Forget that pill!
What we need is none of that frivolous frill

My God! What have we become?
First humping like rampant buns
Then “off with their heads” with the automatic guns

What celebration?
We’re all just in a state of anticipation
For our next big thrill
Our next paycheck to then pay our bills
For those things we want, “need” and “must have”
Cluttering up our lives with copious amounts
Of gadgets, gismos and do-dads

Where, for the sake of our spirits, our species and our health,
Has gone the knowledge and wisdom of money being no part of wealth?

My soul is in shambles because of the chaotic parade
And I quite wish to break-free from this demon’s brigade.

Landfills are filling up as each day goes by
Truck loads to the east, west, north and southern skies
Every day the same as before, alarm will sound
And off to work we zombies abound

And what do we accomplish as each day passes?
What do we gain from this hap-hazardous notion of life?
This world of unapologetic strife?
The world stabbing us in the back with a cerated knife.

When we pushed through the womb and entered this world
Did we go in thinking it would be as good as this glass bowl
Filled with rotten cherries and maggots making holes
In over-exposed fruit, decaying the drupe?

Did we know it would be an experience of hate and crime?
Of love loss and loneliness combined?
One minute of love exploding through our pores
Next a sorrowful heart begging “no more!"

Broken down people walking the streets
Facing the day with a constant sense of defeat
Looming over their heads even when they smile
For they know its just time before it all turns vile

Pleading to end this charade we had no choice of believing in
As children the realities of the harshness hadn’t set in
Or maybe it had for those unfortunate ones
That were handed the truth from very day one

I hear stories and fables and ancient folk lore
Of the once broken-down spirits amongst the poorest of poor
Not growing richer by the cash that they store,
But rather by the goodness they create and inpour
By Adrienne Allmen : New Classic Beauty : http://www.newclassicbeauty.com/