Thursday, March 17, 2011

Open Windows - Jillian Colleen

(This is a poem that was written for me by an aquaintance. The authors name is Jillian Colleen, and since she wrote it I have lost contact with her. So unfortunately I cannot obtain written permission or even give her proper credit. If someone knows her please let me know so I can give her proper acknowledgement on here. One last thing, I have posted this as near as un-edited as I could. I only placed each line on separate lines and added capitals. Other than that everything else is original. Please enjoy.)

The record player skips
Redundant repetition – 
Cruel words and slamming doors
He doesn’t want her to leave
She will not beg him to stay
Stolen kisses turned to time wasted
As he wipes away her tears
Rain splashes on the pavement
Another ‘goodbye’, keys left in the lock
Empty closets
Returned mail
Nothing left to mourn
New neighborhood; new life
In a coffee shop he sips hot brew
Pencil in hand; foot tapping out the beat 
1 and 2 and 3 and...
‘Bloody hell’
‘Excuse me’
Hot coffee and shy eyes interrupt his memories
She collects her wit; ‘sorry - that’ll leave a mark’
He loses his; ‘it already has’ 
So it begins

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